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throwing fist-fulls of ‘throwing fistfuls of’ of red tissue ‘of the red tissue’? to see me looking like a psycho attacking a box. I think this would be better as, ...

Chapter One: Cancer Cancer It’s easy to say where all this started – easy as one, two, three. It started with Dad, when I was sixteen and getting my GCSE ...

Christian. Nice and sort-of ironic. :'D A ten year old boy who is the adopted son of a lesbian couple, and physically fights bullies almost every day of his life.

- Something to snack on as I write, preferably nice and fattening (which I think I burn off through frenzied typing as I get into the flow). - A full ...

The flower was drenched in teardrops. I – loved – this. It’s a truly amazing opening line; fabulous imagery, and immediately snared my attention. Brilliant. a duty, almost, to I’d ...

Living on the outer suburbs, the bus was the only way to work. I think this would be better as, ‘ As I lived on the outer suburbs (of inserttownhere?), ...

Hello! I will be reviewing this piece for you tonight. c: scratching her skin I don’t think that ‘scratching’ is quite strong enough to convey what’s happening here. Maybe try ...

...What're nachos? D; TPBM is currently sitting in a very warm room. (I hate you if you are. xD)

Naw. I don't really like toast that much. |D TPBM dislikes mainstream 'Pop' music.

Could you completely rip apart my story, Listless for me? c:

Andrew ('Andy' / 'Drew'). A thirty year old woman who works as a child psychiatrist, and yet her children despise her. Cold and clinical to people she doesn't know; and ...

A teenage boy who doesn't care about what's 'normal' for his age group; spends more time by himself than with others. Fond of flowers. Stacy Carter.

Aww, damnet. Nope - just an amazing mp3, way better than an iPod. TPBM prefers coffee to tea.

I'm with beckiw - prose all the way for me, unless being forced otherwise. ouo

Definitely right. I've been on, eh, eight hours so far today? xD Probably more though, and I'm planning an all-nighter. TPBM doesn't like the song Poker Face by Lady Gaga. ...