Sinkingtooslow

Very enjoyable, it flowed very nicely. Sounds very sad but soft. The sea churned and pitched, the wind howled, but he never twitched. That was a great beginning.

Interesting perspective and well put together. I enjoyed it. Reminds me of how some of the little kids I know that don't believe me when I tell them about cassette ...

As Bubblewrapped said, I believe reading this poem we are understanding without feeling it. And I agree that the some of best poetry allows the reader to feel what the ...