Sinkingtooslow

Through the window's glass, from under florescent light, watching the trees grow. Clock hands twisting 'round. Quietly changing its hues: Nature turns again. Still she calls to us, declaring the ...

Aw, that's sweet. Yeah, I noticed the missing syllable too. No big deal. Yes, the original haikus are supposed to use nature as metaphors for other things or something like ...

This is wonderful! I don't think the rhythm is off much at all really. At least it sounds perfect to me. But I am terrible with that sort of thing. ...

Very well done and powerful. A few things that have already been stated, yeah, it should be "begun"... Also, I want it all to stop, Just freeze up time. I ...

That was cute. Personally, I despise it when I end up writing poems about not being able to write a poem. It hurts my head. :roll: But yeah... Oh look ...

Ah, Matt! I love your shirt and the picture! My friend was playing that the other day.

Why would you? - Miley Cyrus

The word "special" and "nice" irritate me a bit. But I'm pretty much relaxed about everything else when it's not my own writing. To each his own. But any word ...

6/10 haha...

Thanks for your review, Sapphire, I do appreciate it. You didn't interpret it too badly. It's a complicated story where neither person is exactly innocent. I feel the line with ...

Perhaps Icaruss said it slightly harsher than it needed to be said, perhaps not. But as far as I am concerned, the comments were correct. I remember writing a poem ...

Suspend these thoughts above my aching head and leave me standing with them hanging by a thread. I opened my eyes to see you perched there. your heart hollowed out ...

Hello everyone! It's been a long time since I've been on a writing forum. It all started with TYWC about 8 or 9 years ago... A few days ago a ...

This poem is so sweet and thoughtful. As death creeps closer, Blowing wind upon your cheeks, I know it is not over Even though your life leaks. My only real ...

I love this poem. If this is not your best, than I am insanely jealous of your talent. :) I can definitely relate to the poem having gone through that ...