Sinkingtooslow

Well, I'm not really sure if I liked this... A few things.... I don’t want to smile; I don’t want to cry; Want to stay in my room; Away from ...

Aw, this was really good. It was sweet and simple and does sound like a lullaby. Very great work. So as you listen to this lullaby And the moon brings ...

Banned for forcing an emoticon to stick its tongue out.

Safe in the shadows. Not a heartache to your name. Keeping yourself hidden: hiding from the pain. Who's hiding now from the lies they've spread? Who eats up the gossip ...

Me holding my friend in the pool. I love summer...

Thank you for you comments and thanks for reading my poem. Don't worry if you didn't like it. :)

Thanks for the advice, but no thanks. I'm not "justifying" my work, I like my work, and I'm always open to advice for my poems, but I reserve the right ...

Sorry you didn't like it, but I won't be revising this poem anymore. It is as it should be. It reflects a specific incident, but it is rather vague (it's ...

Hello there, Alexa. I'm pretty (re)new here myself, but welcome. :) I hope you get something out of being here.

This was a very fun, very entertaining poem! I love it! Very nicely done, perhaps it could use a little bit of touch ups here and there, but it seems ...

Alright, I don't disagree or agree with your stance on fireworks, but all the same, it was an interesting read. It was enjoyable to see you put your opinion into ...

hmmm... this poem irritated me, but in a good way! ha. It reminded me of the terrible noise of "silence" that one comes across in a library and such. Those ...

I loved the imagery in this poem! Some very nice descriptions... Words are mazes set in ink, ^A very good description! This really drew me into the poem. Good first ...

whispers and song lyrics sound so much better than the words i put down when i wrote you that letter how many syllables does it take to make you understand ...

Um, wow, I didn't think it rhymed at all... does it? It was a haiku that I wrote in the middle of Lit class because we were talking about Haikus.... ...