Sinkingtooslow

Banned for writing a long confusing sentence that I still don't understand.

Is this your rebuttal to the anti-fireworks poem we had a few days ago? Well, I don't really fancy it too much, but I suppose you do have a talent ...

Seriously, your poem ate my heart. I cannot tell you how much I can relate to this poem and how much I love it. Amazing imagery and just awesome....awesomeness. I ...

I disagree. I don't think a different hook is needed at all. I think the story is wonderful as it is. It doesn't seem amateur in anyway to me, it ...

Banned for making me think of Doctor Who again.... *deep sigh*

Known for apparently residing in a small country known as "Your Face"

Ok. I know exactly what you are talking about. I have been working with Special needs children and adults since I was about 13 or 14. And I love the ...

Aw, I like this. If you are looking to work on it a bit, it might need a little tidying up. But it really is intriguing the way it is. ...

Wow. This is amazing! Really beautiful work! I'm so glad that I sat down to read this. Really, it was amazing. Thank you for posting this! But with the tricycle...did ...

One of my worst nightmares when I was little was these vines grew over our house and suddenly the became alive, and one vine was holding the mirror from beauty ...

And I bet you like pirates too.... HI! Welcome. Hope you like it here. It's been a while since I've been around here so I'm just getting used to it ...

I "Like a gun shot I flew. I didn't look behind me. I didn't open my eyes. But let me open yours." Alex had read it over and over again ...

Welcome! Hope you find this place helpful with your writing.

It's actually pretty good. You rhyme really well too, I can see that from all of your poems. But perhaps a little work with rhythm and grammar could make this ...

I don't think the slight choppy-ness of the piece is altogether that bad, afterall, the sea is choppy. Oh, and Evening and Edges don't rhyme. ha just kidding. But really, ...