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Re: Whisper
It was OK you had a good idea but i found some mistakes. You need to watch for punctuation errors and capitalization errors. Such as for punctuation you need to ...
Nov 19, 2008 -
Re: Our Last Goodbye
i don't see anything wrong with the fifth -to-last line but i would put that line " I love you so much, but you close your eyes , afraid to ...
Nov 3, 2008 -
Re: Let me forget you.
UMMMMMMMMMMMMM i actually liked your poem...alot....i think that it could possibly turn into something more and yes parts of it were confusing ( big words >.
Nov 3, 2008