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Re: The Adventures of Death and Plague (chapter two)
Nice! That was really interesting and captivated my attention as soon as I started it. Very well written, and I couldn't spot anything that was confusing or in need of ...
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: Spirit
An interesting story...I like your frank, direct approach to writing: It's quite refreshing! So far, the only thing I would critique would be how quickly the story progressed. You don't ...
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: Savior Chapter 1
Hmm, I like it! You seemed to struggle between different timings...There's a word for it, but I can't remember. Anyways, you go from speaking about the current time to the ...
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: The Prince
Well this is certainly interesting! It grabbed my attention immediately, and I am quite intrigued...There isn't a whole lot to base a full opinion on, however, I would happily read ...
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: The Adventures of Death and Plague (title pending)
Hmm, this is quite intriguing! I love this style of writing, and you appear to do it very well. I hope that you'll continue it. :) Only a few critiques ...
Mar 2, 2011