SimplyPersnikety

This poem is going into my favorite poem file. I really enjoyed the idea and the punctuation and spelling mistakes were very clever. I think it makes it a even ...

Saunas also can be used. From the Natural Cures Book.

Wishing you were here, to fill me up with joy. Hoping you will come, when all is said and done. Why must you be so far away? where stars and ...

Wow, I have never gotten such a long review before! Thank you! I realize there are a lot of errors-- this is after all the first draft-- and you helped ...

come on! review!

So here is my first non poetry story on YWS. Hope you like it! It may turn out to be a series of short stories but I don't know. Thanks! ...

So this is a poem I wrote at 12:45 AM Sunday. I have this weird "problem" that I can't write anything good until PM so I only have 11 hours ...

It was ment to be somewhat funny. Why ya so damn lazy? How many times do I have to tell you to mow that grass? Get off your lazy ass. ...

Katrina you have done your duty, Satan has erected your call Now in the fiery depths of hell the crowd is expanding Gostav is on its way you had better ...

I am writing about 18 different novels. At the same time... Talk about torture! :P My main two are lightly titled Guardian and Eleanor Rigby. but I'm not going to ...

I have never ever never ever finished writing a book or really thought up a good idea. I love to write and would really really like to write "THE END" ...

Wow, This is a lovely piece of poetry! I agree with Wojovox. children stories and romances don't really mix well. I literally went "Huh?" and had to stop and reread ...

Very interesting, Like gamechanger10 and -save-ferris- I had no idea where this poem was going but I like had it turned out. Your rhyming was awesome-- kudos for that-- and ...

Very nice poem! It made me laugh! The ending is the best! "Then went home to change into something besides a strappy sundress" This entire poem is totally describing me ...

Thank you for your comment Writ3! I was having a problem trying to find something to rhyme with care =P Though I was wondering, are you thinking of the word ...