SimpleBicycle

Hello again! I'm here for another review. I like the flow you've got going so far. Nothing much has happened yet--but that's the point. The slow buildup will make the ...

Heyo! I'm back with another review. Let's jump right in. This scene feels like a transition between two plot-heavy scenes. (The torture, + whatever event begins after this. My guess ...

Oh gosh, this drew me in right away and kept me on the edge of my seat the whole way through. My heart is still pounding as I write this ...

This is a great first chapter that left me curious for more! You've got some great imagery right off the bat--"a gaping maw to swallow the sun" is a beautiful ...

This is such a great concept! Someone "dying" and then waking up so many times that the funeral-goers are exasperated--I thought that was funny. You do a great job of ...