Silverwit

His footsteps were light and quick as he crossed over on to the virgin snow that spread widely over tarnished grass. Run. Run. Run. His heart thrummed loudly, beating at ...

Thank you all for the compliments and critiques. Espically the critiques, I was in much need of them.

This is Jing. :3 He is one of the main characters in a series of fantasy stories I am working on. He is one of my favorites but probably the ...

This was originally going to be a short story my friends challenged me to write...but now it has progressed in to being a rewrite of a book I'm working on. ...

Nice chapter but you still need to work on a few things. Watch out for typos!

You have a nice start but you need to work with your characters. Actually breathe life in to them and make them seem real.