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Re: My Green Tea Latte - Prologue
Hey there! I saw this was also by you and decided to chack it out. Once again, it's short simple, but I believe that's all that's required here. It says ...
Sep 23, 2011 -
Re: Waiting for You
I was glad to read this. It's short, true, but it's okay- it's simple, and could be made into something longer and stronger but doesn't have to be. I like ...
Sep 23, 2011 -
Re: Whale Pirates
You should write more! I'm just stating to get the feel of it. Maybe you could put a little more description in it? How big is the black ship compared ...
Sep 7, 2011 -
Re: The Writers of Dreams
I would love to hear this as a song. This would be something I would listen to over and over just to get it stuck in my head, something I ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: The Masquerader Chapter Six Part Three
Sorry I've been gone for so long, life's been busy. But, here I am now! I love reading the Masquerader! I'm interested to see how this is going to work, ...
Jul 15, 2011 -
Re: Silver Chains
This is a new project I'm working on. Reviews and plot suggestions are appreciated. :smt002 ~Prologue~ Deep rumbling echoed off the stone walls of the winding cavern. The heart of ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: The Debated Importance of Cookies Versus Essays
I'm sorry if my review isn't as good as everyone else's, but I just have to tell you how much I like this story. The beginning made me laugh and ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: Dragonmaster Part 2: The Palace of Eternal Sleep
Now I've read up to this point in your novel, and I love it. I absolutely love it. You have great spelling, grammar, word use, and I haven't found hardly ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Break that Fall {Chapter 6}
Aah..... Yes, what a good story about surviving society. I love hos she and Nick have such a history already and understand each other. I love how this story is ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Break that Fall {Chapter5}*edited*
... This is great. I love reading it. It's so obvious how true friends they are. It's the kind of friendship you love reading about. I don't really know what ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: The Masquerader Chapter 6 Part 2
I read it, and I thought it was great. I love how well Ranael played him, and how she surprised him so thoroughly. That's one great poker face she's got. ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: The Colours
I have to say, this is a nice, simple poem. I especially like how you use figurative language to make the trees seem like living beings. I believe that you ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Stand Up
:) Hi! I read this, and I have to say, it's great. I love the rhythm you have, the story it depicts. It's like a letter to an old friend. ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Change and Survival: The Experiments' Story- Chapter 8
Sorry guys, I was having troubles. Now it's up. ~Chapter 8~ As they entered the clearing, it appeared Grace’s band had already arrived. She herself sat on one of the ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Blue ~Prologue and Chapter 1
Hey Drama! I've got nothing much to review, so I'm reading another one of your stories. First off: I like how the title itself doesn't betray anything yet fits in ...
Jun 14, 2011
