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  • Other Poetry Re: The Things I Could Write About

    This is such a fun poem! The rhythm could use a bit of work, as could the rhyme scheme, but I love it. The way it skips around so much ...

    Apr 7, 2008
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Day In, Day Out

    This is just a short short story (a mini story, really), that just sort of popped into my head. I don't have much practice with sci-fi, so I hope it's ...

    Apr 7, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: My Prison

    I very much like the subject matter. It's easy to relate to, which is good. The rhythm, however, doesn't flow very well. Other than that, it's really good. Great job.

    Apr 7, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Some Where Out There

    While I do like the simplicity of this poem, it does need more detail, a bit more fleshing out. The random capitalization and lack of punctuation doesn't quite add to ...

    Apr 6, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello fellows.

    Hey, everyone! I suppose I should introduce myself. I'm a writer (obviously) who writes both prose and poetry. For my prose, I usually write fantasy, but I also like sci-fi. ...

    Apr 6, 2008


The wince that you wince when you see your quote in the quote generator is quite a wince, I tell ya. To know that the whole YWS community has read and judged your quote is quite an awkward feeling like oh noes. *manly blush*
— Arcticus