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Re: The Things I Could Write About
This is such a fun poem! The rhythm could use a bit of work, as could the rhyme scheme, but I love it. The way it skips around so much ...
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: Day In, Day Out
This is just a short short story (a mini story, really), that just sort of popped into my head. I don't have much practice with sci-fi, so I hope it's ...
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: My Prison
I very much like the subject matter. It's easy to relate to, which is good. The rhythm, however, doesn't flow very well. Other than that, it's really good. Great job.
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: Some Where Out There
While I do like the simplicity of this poem, it does need more detail, a bit more fleshing out. The random capitalization and lack of punctuation doesn't quite add to ...
Apr 6, 2008 -
Re: Hello fellows.
Hey, everyone! I suppose I should introduce myself. I'm a writer (obviously) who writes both prose and poetry. For my prose, I usually write fantasy, but I also like sci-fi. ...
Apr 6, 2008
