Silver

Hello! In general, I noticed you had a lot of typos that could have been fixed by just proofreading it before you sent it here. As a reviewer, I know, ...

I have to agree with freewritersavvy. If you were going for humor, I don't really feel any. Neither does it have any feeling. You do use a lot of description, ...

I'm sorry, I don't think the punctuation matters too much. I mean, a bit of punctuation could obviously make the poem better, but the lack of it doesn't make it ...

i silver i like ice cream ice cream is good ice cream rhymes with... idk. Good rhymes with hood. I'm a poet and i didn't know it :D That was ...

Hello! In all, I think this piece has a lot of potential. It's pretty good right now, but it could use some editing. Also, I think you should go into ...

I like it. Like Sassykat said, short and simple. I do think you should add more; it doesn't feel quite complete. I would change the third line of the first ...

Hey! I really like the way your poem flows. I really didn't know that chemo affects your personality. I think you should expand on this; go into more details, make ...

Hi, I think you did a really good job on this poem. I love how it's so short yet powerful and relatable. Really, the only thing I can think of ...

Have you seen The tree-rimmed meadow Blanketed in snow? Will you tell me where it is? I seem not to know. Do you know The ancient oak Standing all alone? ...

Very nice poem! Sometimes shorter poems can be much more powerful, as yours is. I have some nitpicks for you :P Tranquil moments, passed on the seashore w atching as ...

I've never critiqued poetry before; you're my first try! xD Here it goes: I really like what you are trying to say with your poem. You do say it nicely ...

Hey, I'm Silver. Okay, so I think you have a good plot here. It could be expanded upon, and some parts didn't quite make sense, but a pretty good plot. ...

Thank you ^_^ I'm not incredible at chatting, but I shall try. Silver isn't my real name, but I wish it was. I'm slightly interested in anime, but I just ...

I'm awful at introductions... okay, so you all can call me Silver :) I love writing and such and I don't really know what else to say. So, hello! On ...