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Re: Falling- A Short Story
Hi this was good, I like the story, the feelings, you decribed them very well we felt as been present with the girst all the time. the end was good ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: Break my Heart and Hope to Die- Chapter 2
Hi this chapter is good, i like it, even if i did not read the first chapter, but it's clear. the two characters are very well described, and the style ...
Mar 6, 2009
