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Re: Falling- A Short Story
Hi this was good, I like the story, the feelings, you decribed them very well we felt as been present with the girst all the time. the end was good ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: Untitled.
Hi everybody, So this is my first writing, I know it is full with mistakes, hope you don't give up quickly. I still don't have a title, so it is ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: Hey All
Hello Sisser, welcome to the yws, hope you find all what you're looking for here. so, what about your writings, waiting to read them. do you like poetry? WELCOME AGAIN, ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: Schizophrenia (edited)
This is good, I enjoyed reading it. Hope to read your next writing soon. Siham
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: Best Piece of Advice
Love what you are writing, Love can push us to do our best. So Love your writing.
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: The Writer Incognito
Me too I don't like to tell everybody that I'm writing, maybe when I finish I'll say it. For now, only my mum and best friend know about it. I ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: The Name's Tori, Pleased To Meet Ya
Hello welcome again to the YWS, hope you find everything you need here. if you face troubles, just ask for help, and everyone will help, be sure. okay, enjoy been ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: anything and everything
Hi johnny2x4 nice to meet you well it's good to know that you are a day dreamer. it hepls lot o get rid of situations that we dilike sometimes. well ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: Who.....Who.....Who.....?
The only reason why I’m writing this is because I’m feeling sad today, and usually when been so, I prefer to write something, just anything, even take the pen and ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: Break my Heart and Hope to Die- Chapter 2
Hi this chapter is good, i like it, even if i did not read the first chapter, but it's clear. the two characters are very well described, and the style ...
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: The Day Before Tuesday
Hello Monday Raven Clyde, This was fantastic, believe me I could not stop reading till I finished the whole thing. If in your normal writing you use this beautiful style, ...
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: I... well, I... I mean - um...
Hello nixonblitzen how do you do? nice introduction you wrote well about your shiness don't be worried, i used to be like you, you just need time and you'll be ...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: What genre will my novel fall into? Please help!
Hi Sabir let me tell you first that you got a nice story i think it will fit in the other fiction good luck Siham
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: So this is me
Hello MYBIGBLUEBOX nice to meet you, and welcome to the YWS be sure that you'll find all kinds of help here everybody will do the best to help, specialy with ...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: The real xDudettex
Hi xDudettex nice to meet you, it was a nice introduction good to hear that you have finished your story, wish i do the same soon enjoy the site Siham
Mar 2, 2009
