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Considering both reviews tackled the same thing, I probably should revise that next time through. Thanks for putting that out there, and I will address it when I review it ...

At this point in the writing, I wasn't sure how much chance I would get later on to explain things, and at this point, were I to go back and ...

Awesome! Thanks for taking the time to review it, and yeah, there's not too many traditional sci-fi elements here, since the story primarily focuses on the characters and drama. Glad ...

Steph's way of getting in Nels's hair is mostly about getting the deed done before Nels notices. Once he's under the former police officer's control, there's not much hope for ...

Yeah, the second-person thing was inspired by C.S. Lewis's work, and I'm not sure if I'll keep it in later drafts. It seemed like a way to spice up typical ...