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Well, I like the idea of the story. Like Joe said, you have a total OMGAH moments. It's like BOOM spur of the moment, totally out of the blue kidnapping, ...

Those are definitely on my books to read list. Actually I bought the first book so that I would be sure to read it. (weird I know) But my friend ...

Hm. Both interesting and typical. I'm really not sure if that is possible though. Anyway here are my theories. Well Ellen seems to have a history with "ladies' men", which ...

Hello Sopf, I like the name, different eh? Anyways, welcome! I won't say pm me if you have any questions because I do that myself. So fantasy? Well, if you ...

First of all, thanks to everyone who critiqued, you rock! Sorry if it was a little painful to read though. At least I now have an excellent guide and checklist ...

Here is my dilemma and since it is about info dumping I suppose I have come to the right place! *yay!* The situation. My character just moved so I have ...

Okay. And she tells herself, "Take the plunge, you can do it!" So I'm being brave. Be proud!!! : ) But, this is my first poetry piece ever. So while ...

Severe bummer... I wonder if the formal letter people actually read it or not. If not, do you think it was because of your age? That is highly discriminating! Ugh.

The method of catagorizing books for age groups is certainitly flawed. A few months ago I went to my local book store in search of a trilogy I had read ...

First of all, I want to say that I loved it. Ya I know. Loved it? I didn't even know what it meant and I was the one that wrote ...

Well, I am a christian that believes in God and such. I'm fairly new to the whole scene, considering that I just started going to church about a year ago. ...

Even though the topic of the story has been used time and time again for school portfolios, writing projects, and such, yours has to be my favorite. First of all. ...

Well, how do you know when you are forcing your leading girl and guy together? Plus, if you do want to match up them up how do you do it ...

Hey DragonWriter, I really liked the chapter and I think it has potential to be the beginning to any story. I did spot some little things that bugged me that ...

Well, overall I really liked it because it was different. I do agree that it would be quite interesting if you were to make every other line in the poem ...