Shyblueishflower

Forever I lay Bare, but open Still, but silent Welcome all of the uncharted Heavenly lights bind me now Hell's temptations draw me down One thousand hands hidden By two ...

Hearts unfold And reality beholds The dreams that slither in-between Grasp for air Breathe I dare But one cannot Speak the unspoken Lay me down Slice me open Hearts are ...

I love this poem. And as said before; it's beautiful and I don't see any mistakes in it. Good job and keep up the good work.

Great poem. I'm going to recommend this to my friend, because this really relates to her and I think this can help through some of her problems. Thanks a lot ...

I loved this poem. I felt like you wrote this from your heart and not your mind. This spoke really deep to me and left my mind wondering.

Loved it! It spoke so deep to me.

This just really moved me. I just feel like you've given me a whole new view of the world and our society. Thank you so much for writing this.

Shake me, break me Throw me away I am nothing, but forgotten Take my heart Step on it Squish it Until it is dry Drink the blood And watch my ...

This is the first run-on I've ever liked. It's a really good poem. I really understand the feeling radiating from the poem. Keep writing.

This is a really good story so far. The only things I noticed were a few grammar and punctuation mistakes. But, other than that, everything was good. Please keep writing, ...

Hello here are just a few things that I noticed: A Piece of chocolate cake ♦That makes me shrink and small - Ok to shrink means to get smaller ♠And ...

Wow, this is an awesome poem. As said before, this is really different from your usual love poems. I really like this, please keep writing more.

Forget about the darkness And forget about stars If you were really focused You would see the world is really falling apart Every moment someone dies But every other moment ...

The night was silent, except for the beat of his heart. Everyone knows you shouldn't walk alone in the dark. He quickened his pace in fear. But it was too ...

Midnight stars watch over me as the shadows scratch at my doors. Do not let the shadows fool you, for they are not what they seem. The shadows are merely ...