Shredderman

I enjoyed reading this piece, but as the previous reviewer noted it, grammar, spelling and punctuation are a definite must. Some parts of your story seemed a bit vague and ...

I read with a sort of morbid fascination. It was extremely engaging, and you could really tell from the vocabulary you used not a sense of depression or sadness or ...

Oh wow this had me going until the end, which cracked me up. At first I thought this was about aliens, then fairies, then insects, and I was getting more ...

I’m up early, Way before school. To watch the sunrise. Don’t tell anybody. this is really nice That ruins it. The grumpy moonlight clouds, Shove and growl, Away. To show ...