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nah, im not annoyed, but its weird when i write something hoping to get a few effects and suddenly acquire several more. kind of confusing, but thanks for pointing those ...

ah, thanks for the advice, i didn't even realize that i was ixing tenses... oh well, i haven't written in a whle, I'll blame it on my skill getting rusty. ...

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Sesshy! Yay! Yep, i iked all of them, and especially 9, (no hippie stuff... sighs in releif, but im biased. 8 was also really cool.

the animal thing was supposed to be refering to the father, but obviously that wasn't apparent. The idea was that when he made Temari's mother pregnant, he tainted her families ...

Ah! hey! you reviewed! Yay! yes, the "easy" is a character tick, but the mother is such a minor character that I wonder why I even bother. I'd change it, ...

I liked your poem it had nice meter, and rhymed, but I think the lines "Pheonix feather, Sprightly elf" are kind of off topic. Maybe you should explain that more? ...

i don't understand why you put the "listen to the voices in your head" part. I think you should either expand or explain that. I liked the poem though, it ...

Thanks, I've tried to do some edits to fix those. Actually, in my first draft of this, i was overusing that word a lot more, but then i realized that ...

Scarlet claws run down the young boy’s neck, leaving a trail of red dripping down unto his chest. He shivers, paralysed in pain and pain. His eyes flick desperately through ...