Shraz

Oh, I'm sorry, I thought I did rate it..... Is 16+ wrong?

staring flat ahead curled in cheap terminal seats the raw kiss of steel ratty dreads and hems ooze old rot and cigarettes tarred tides ripple teeth paint scarred in bathrooms ...

One thing you have to understand—the people who come here aren't looking for a vacation. The smiling women and the well-dressed men aren't here celebrating anniversaries, birthdays, or graduations.

Thanks. Honestly the tense changes are just something I suck at. I change things when I edit and forget to change all of it to fit the latest decision. Chaos. ...

Under The Rug Two weeks passed and it happened again. Eyes shoot open to darkness, flounder helplessly, then sink into focus. Evan’s heart flutters frantically with a familiar panic. His ...

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thanks. my egos growing right now.... okay i've popped it. yeah, i thought about what you said in the last part, and it does seem a little out of place. ...

I. In the spring, I used to love to climb trees. I’d swim up the branches, jumping fearlessly from limb to limb. I’d stop at the very top, stretched out ...

Thanks, I've tried adding more description, and I've messed with a few scenes, so there's probably new mistakes, but oh well. I like this version better.

And months have gone by and i finally get around to reviewing this. He, uh? Sorry? I can't help that I'm lazy. anyway I have a few edits. It is ...

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GAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ANGRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FOR THE LAST TIME ALREADY, (takes deep breath) THIS IS A LITTLE STORY. AS IN NO CHAPTERS. AS IN NO NEED FOR PLOT. NO. NEED. FOR. PLOT

Ah, I might post the big story here, but mostly I figure I'll write little stories about it, posting them here, before incorporating them in my big story and sending ...

haha. inadvertant canada humor. oops. um... for the "not mourning either of them" i meant for it to be kind of a question answered in a later story, but the ...

thanks for the heads up, if you were curious about the prophecy bit, then I have a piece in production now that will explore that topic.