Shota

I did read your line-by-line review, thank you so much for taking the time to do it. And thank you for taking the time to share your opinion, your insights ...

Thanks for stopping by with the review! I totally was noticing how I kept referring to the Smith in so many ways, and yes, it was bugging me too so ...

Thanks so much for stopping by and for the review, I really appreciate it! And funny enough it just bolded itself automatically when I copy and pasted it to the ...

Yea me either, I just love the books :)

Yea good to know, like I said it's a challenge reviewing the end of a book lol. And a song of fire and ice is the name of the book ...

Of course, you got a great start for a first draft!

Thanks for your comments, I think you did a great job and reviewing! And aftermath is totally one word... thanks for the catch You are also the second person to ...

Yes you did! You mentioned a couple of thoughts I was already wrestling with. One of those being the lack of description for what was going on, and the pace ...

Yes it helps a bunch! Thank you so much for stopping by and giving input, I really appreciate it!

Of course, and like I said maybe that was just me? Not sure, I'd ask a few other people and see what they say lol

That's a good wow im assuming lol