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I'm working on a comedy fantasy. I'm on chapter 2 now. You can read chapter one if you'd like, but it really doesn't have a thick plot yet.

Here's a short one. It's the 2nd chapter of what I'm doing. The link to the 1st chapter is on it too if you want to read that 1st.

I think I' on the on deck circle. Thanks. ☺

Looks like I'm up next.

You can try mine out for size if you'd like.

If you review this I'll even throw in a brownie for good measure.

Thank you! ☺

Looks like I get to be the 1st. ☺ It's a comedy/fantasy story. It's kind of designed for the young and immature male demographic, but I'm hoping everyone will like ...

Hey there. I need both help and a review. I think you have to read it to help, so you get two birds with one stone. I'm having trouble with ...

I think I figured it out. For the "actions" I just used italics. To transition in and out I did like a line break with ***. Here's the (semi) final ...

Looks like you need something to do. This story is really for the young male demographic, so I would love to hear your thoughts on it.

You really must like reviewing. ☺ Try this one.

I thought it was bard too. It "corrected" me and said it was spelled baird. Thanks for that. Yes, I know what the role he plays, and I know why ...

The subject might be unclear, so I'll explain further. The narrator is actually a character. He is a Baird who tells a story from inside a tavern. The problem I'm ...

I think I'm about done with this. I know its not really complete but it's good enough for me.