Shizzley

Hi and wow, I really like these lyrics, they conveyed a lot of emothion through the words however there were a few little mistakes which I noticed. What a shame ...

Hearing the screams of the dying, the living calling to their friends, and every sound in between. The vampire massacre was horrible .The government could not stop the beasts. So ...

I really enjoyed this poem, it was simple, funny and brought a smile on my face. It was really uplifting and happy when it sometimes seems that everything around you ...