Shishu95

A door slams shut. Fear overcomes her. She tries to go to school. To make herself useful. All she gets is torment. Every night she waits, Until he comes and ...

Hey! I really like this piece. I think it has so much emotion in it, and sadly, it portrays a situation where many girls have been in. Since this is ...

They were ridiculously high and she was quite tall anyway, but once she had seen them she had to buy them. Okay, so I really like this piece of writing, ...

Hey guys! Thanks for the awesome feedback (: I really appreciate it. Okay, so I kind of suck at punctuation, especially between conversations between characters (that didn't really make sense, ...

I like this. I think you should expand on it, because it'll be stronger. Also, try "My, oh, my." Grammar mistakes :) sorry. Instead of "Falling so hard" which doesn't ...

This is absolutely freaking amazing. I love it. You are so talented. And now, because of your writing, I hate your father. Not your biological one. The other one. Have ...

As Clare Boothe Luce once said, “Because I am a woman, I must make unusual efforts to succeed. If I fail no one will say, “She doesn’t have what it ...

I agree with Flower~Child. It would look nicer if it was taken at a different angle. Maybe you could try taking it from a lower level. It could make for ...

I like this poem, but try using more descriptive words :) It would make it more interesting.

I'm so sorry. As you've probably read in the posts above, this never deserved to happen to you. Ray should go burn in hell for what he did to you. ...

Edited ! CHAPTER 1 As I sit here listening to sad Taylor Swift songs, I realize how shitty my life really is. My love life, that is. The rest of ...

I agree with you. This book was amazing, to say the least. My English teacher was reading it, and she recommended it to me, and since then I've read almost ...

James picked up his wits and sprinted towards the camp. I don't quite understand this quote.. Also, you start a lot of your sentences/paragraphs with James did, etc.

A thirty minutes drive with Jessie (alt+q) I think it should be, "A thirty minute drive with Jessie." It makes more sense :) Other than that, you have an incredible ...