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Re: The Effect of Confucianism on Gender Equality in China
How has Confucianism affected gender equality through social relationships in modern day China? Confucianism placed their footprint on China during the times of the Qin dynasty, and along with it, ...
Jan 12, 2010 -
Re: Emilia
The images are still clear in my head. Vases shattering, strange women leaving my house in the early hours of the morning, mascara-stained sheets lying next to the washing machine. ...
Jan 12, 2010 -
Re: I Hate Everything About That Night
Thanks so much everyone. @alecmoran I haven't worked on this in AGES, but I think I need to explain more and basically do what you said, thanks for the review ...
Jan 12, 2010 -
Re: Adolescence- The crappiest time of your life.
@time8keeper, THANK YOUU ! :D i'll work on the typos :) @Ashleigh Brown, thanks hun :) @xXTheBlackSheepXx, your review did help, A LOT! thanks so much for taking the time ...
Oct 25, 2009 -
Re: I Hate Everything About That Night
As I stared into the pale moonlight, you surprised me as I saw you walking across Shelley's newly paved driveway. You usually didn't turn up to these types of events. ...
Sep 16, 2009 -
Re: Love so pretty yesterday.
This is REALLY good. Only some minor things to fix. It's "innocence". Maybe it would be better to say, "To shelter dreams of lost tomorrow"? Otherwise, I really liked it ...
Sep 16, 2009 -
Re: Adolescence- The crappiest time of your life.
@Meep(: Hey, thanks for the comment ! I really appreciate your comment, not joking one bit :) you're SO nice and I love hearing praise about my story haha (: ...
Sep 16, 2009 -
Re: My Main Character
Hey! First of all, REALLY GOOD DRAWING! :) I can't draw to save my life, so I think you did really well (: She reminds me a bit of Bella ...
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: Painting Love
It's really gripping. Ahh i want to know if Rebecca got married to the Irish guy! Did she? You should really continue both the stories (: They're both really great. ...
Jul 9, 2009 -
Re: New York
1. Amazing shot. I absolutely love it =) 2. Awesome shot. How did you take it? But I think the lighting is a bit off, it would look better if ...
Jul 3, 2009 -
Re: Anthro
Hey! I think this is a great picture, but I think you could improve on some things. 1. The feet look a bit strange. 2. It would look much better ...
Jul 3, 2009 -
Re: Remembrance Cafe
Hey! I like this =) It sounds like it could turn into a really great story, but I just want to correct you on a few things. Always there was ...
Jun 26, 2009 -
Re: random writing?
I slipped my sulking legs into a pair of straight leg jeans and grabbed the first random blouse I could find. Hey! Okay, so first of all, I like this ...
Jun 26, 2009 -
Re: The Inch
Hey! I really like this (: I think it's quite a refreshing idea to write something like this, because I've never read a piece like this one on YWS. I ...
Jun 26, 2009 -
Re: Oblivious
Hey guys ! Thanks for the replies ;D I'm going to change it now, and edit it later (: hahaha. Thanks you! x
Jun 17, 2009
