Shishu95

Hey Elinor :) Thanks for the review! It helped :) Well i was thinking of making it like an introduction, and then answering all the questions along the way you ...

Hi Everyone! Decided to delete this story because I really didn't like it, but thank you so much for the help!

Hey, sorry I forgot to add, I think you should fix this. “You said that before. It’s not giving up doughnuts, Jimmy. It’s quitting nicotine.” I don't think that quitting ...

I ended up with a black skirt with medium-sized sequins along the waist that went halfway down my thigh except for the frill that went as low as above my ...

The girl's body was unaturally still, Should be, The girl's body was unnaturally still, A squell escaped her lips the sound quite shrill. Maybe, "A squell escaped her lips and ...

“And that’s just not enough. You’ve done too much. Too much happened with the multiple girls. You’ve used too much Marijuana,” I replied, with tears in my eyes. “I can’t ...

I love this. I think you're an amazingly talented poet, :) It's just sometimes I think its hard for me to differentiate the narrator, so it's a bit confusing but ...

These are amazing! But I think on the 1st picture, I think Jake's neck and jaw are a bit off, as well as Neytiri's nose. Second picture; Jake's jaw again ...

I know you may not understand this, and that it could cause you more grief than you were meant to bear, but it is your duty to humanity to bear ...

I totally agree with you. I didn't like it at all. There was so much hype on it and when I watched it, it was honestly a load of crap ...

I know, but in Asian Studies we were told to act like it was. -.-

China and Europe are both extremely different countries with contradicting political and economic systems, as well as different sets of values, but because of the geography of these countries, China ...

these are the first two chapters of a story im writing. grade as harsh as possible. thanks!! :) Chapter 1 I stared out my window, searching for answers. The moon ...

Thank you! You did help Kyousuke. We had a time limit and a word limit, so I had to rush the events :S Or I thought it wouldn't be as ...

@Forestqueen808; I'm REALLY glad that you liked it! :) Thanks for the review. @Kyllorac; I understand where you're coming from, I have a bad habit of adding a hidden level ...