Shireling

I had a great review written up but then I had computer problem and lost it. Here is my second attempt. Sorry if it seems a bit abrupt but now ...

Hello, I found your story a few days ago and devoured it. Simply loved it. I am now a Shan fan. I was going to give you a critique but ...

Hey bro looks like you have done some work on Harestin since I last saw it. I found a few spots you might want to consider. First of all: And ...

Bro, I agree with most of the other reviewers, but hey, it is good start. Keep that vision in mind as you try to find the write words to describe ...