Shireling

I have to say that I agree with about how good Cornelia Funke's books are. I especially liked Inkheart because of all the references to books in the book, also ...

Wow, cool chapter. I thought Kit was great, I especially liked this passage. Whistle, crack . As the tingling numbness hit me again, I remembered the word I had been ...

Terribly sorry about the long delay in finishing my review for this. Review of Chapter 3 I haven't found anything major, just some occasional typos. "What?" Li squinted. Wiggins and ...

I saw your link to this poem in your signature and figured that I should check out a fellow Ringer's work. I'm know very little about poetry so I just ...

I finally got around to crit this sorry if it seemed like a long time. Ok the major problem here is the part where Leah and the F.B.I take cover ...

THIOBS #1: A review "Nah..." Wiggins got that look on his face that always made me get mad. I stuck my tongue out at him. Tobey, seeing this, and recognizing ...

Way cool! I read through the complete Sherlock Holmes last year and loved most of them. This has the sound of becoming a sweet fanfic. I can't wait to find ...

Ah much better, I can crit this easier. The whole chunk was a little too much at a time. This is a pretty good beginning, you introduce the main characters ...

Hail Sir Wozzell, I bring thee greetings from the Shire. I skimmed through your story and I have to say you have some good material in there. I especially thought ...

I concur as to what the previous critics have expounded. In this case more would be better. What you have is not really enough to even be a separate chapter ...

Thanks for the PM about the new chapter, it's another enjoyable addition. Here are my suggestions and comments. "What about school?" h e asked, seated at the kitchen table. The ...

Wow, RachetWriter was right. The Geezer's Property is a pretty cool tale. I'm not going to give much of a critique right now, I am almost falling asleep at the ...

Another great chapter to a great story. I read the previous chapters awhile ago but since you had already recieved several excellent reviews and critiques I didn't know what to ...

You posted the Superdog story! The very random tale of a valiant dog, hero of a far away galaxy. I also noted that you failed to mention me as your ...

When I saw the mention of Tolkien and elves I knew I had to check this out, so I skimmed through all seven chapters. However as Claudette and Royboy said, ...