Shinrai

Thank you I'll fix that continuity error right now! :)

Im not going to change it to black ... The rainbow was symbolism from the bible ... the poem wasn't supposed to be about God either but rather showing of ...

Lies on lies ... it was made to be repetive ... i used the red just so i could show that the first and last lines were made to be ...

Thanks Daisuki! I'm glad you liked it so much

:) I'm not going to nitpick about anything I'm not the one to ask for that kind of stuff but i still really liked this wish you had written more ...

"I thought that some of the lines didn;t flow as well as they could, and you spelled or wrong. (ore)" - cityofdragons Thank you :) i use Google Chrome which ...