Shinigamizm

Thank you, Helpful Mchelpfulpants. :) (Oh, I do so love your username!) I appreciate your comments, and of course, I'm happy you enjoyed it so much! This is one of ...

Thanks you two, I'll take everything you said on board and have another look at the lines you highlighted. :D This isn't one I've shown to anyone before so an ...

Thanks Music! :D I was scared this wasn't going to get any comments at all, but here you are to save the day, hehe. Glad you liked it!!

Thank you. :D I've been writing poetry for a long time, so I hope I'm capable at it haha. This one is one of my favourites, so I felt I ...

Thanks so much for reading :D There isn't really much rhythm to it, its freeverse so I just wanted it read naturally. When printed out the poem is centered, and ...

Thank you for reading :D I wanted a dramatic finish, I guess, and an unpredictable rhyming scheme.