Shinigamizm

I've got enough replies now and have been busy working on organising them, but thanks so much to all you other volunteers. :) The response here has been great!

Thank you, Helpful Mchelpfulpants. :) (Oh, I do so love your username!) I appreciate your comments, and of course, I'm happy you enjoyed it so much! This is one of ...

The kitchen in the morning. A clear sky outside, hints of spring in the air. A day like any other in April. A pair of hands, slender and young, working ...

For me this is about trees. The descriptive of 'gnarled' and 'older than time' gave me that idea, if I'm wrong then that's fine, one of the best things about ...

Yes its extensions, I make & sell hair extensions so I wear them in photos for free advertisement. *sneaky* My wrist tattoo is what's in my sig, 'transient guests are ...

I won't lie, I found Jane Austen's 'Emma' to be a terrible bore. However, the worst book I've read is probably 'Brisingr' by Chris Paolini. I read on after Eragon ...

I agree, you should definitely be proud of it! It's very whimsical and you show a great amount of wit and control. I loved all of your rhyming and it ...

I agree with ballerina13, there didn't seem to be much emotion behind the words. There were some good images presented in this piece but I don't feel anything about them ...

shinigamizm you are gorgeous.. i'm sure its been said before ayy? :-) and what does shinigamizm mean anyways??? anyways, here is me and stuffz my eyes are blue though, not ...

Okay, I'm sending out the last few now, thanks so much to everyone that volunteered, you've really helped me out. :D

I think this is clever, and I think I can see what you're writing to do with it, but for me the presentation is awkward. The A- B- S-'s etc. ...

Okay I've sent you three a questionnaire. :) I need just five more responses if anyone else doesn't mind helping, thank you :D

Thanks you two, I'll take everything you said on board and have another look at the lines you highlighted. :D This isn't one I've shown to anyone before so an ...

Lost_in_dreamland: Thank you so much for taking the time to comment on each of them, I loved reading what you had to say. :) I agree that the first one ...

Thanks Music! :D I was scared this wasn't going to get any comments at all, but here you are to save the day, hehe. Glad you liked it!!