Shimmer

I love simply shows your love and care for your sister. The last line is awesome, I think Latin is great.. Good work :) -*Shimmer

Being able to express yourself in ways that other people cannot; thinking outside the box.

I love random non-sensical jumble!

Thanks, I'm having a pretty good time here so far.

First of all, let me say this. This is a very dreamy poem, and it reminds me of walking through a quiet fog. Is that how you wanted it to ...

Thank you very much! I edited it to reflect your observations. I hope they're satisfactory. You're welcome. Just here to help as much as I can.

Thank you..:P

Beautiful and breathtaking, the blackness of the maw, her power leaves me quaking, she leaves everyone else in awe. I like this stanza. The last line has a word too ...

I don't want it to have imagery..just short, simple, and quickly romantic. Thank you for all of your comments, and for your suggestions everyone.

I agree, Sophie... And thanks zell, I'll be sure to check out your writing..

No, no, it does not. At least it looks like it does..but that's just a coincidence..

Thanks for the comments everyone, I'm going to look over the poem and change some things. Especially Writersdomain, thanks for the big help.

Lol, that kinda caught a lot of people's eye. I'm glad there's at least someone who thinks so, Snoink..I've never met anyone else who thinks so. Thanks for all the ...

I'm not understanding..are you asking what my avatar means? The avatar is just an avatar I guess..why is there something wrong with it?

Hey, I'm Shimmer... I'm 13 years old and about to turn 14, only two weeks and a day left! (April 7th) I like to read, I guess..but haven't been able ...