Shimmer

ty8iwsw isw weirde Translation: This is weird.

Uh..nope, don't think so..but maybe I did..or, no, maybe I didn't..Oh, maybe..yeah I think so. - Maddie Have you ever wished upon a star?

Yes, derange should be deranged. I liked it pretty was cute. :P -*Shimmer

The first thing I noticed was how many commas there were. I think you should leave some out; no need for commas at the end of stanzas. In fact, the ...

Freaky..but awesome.

Very...I cannot find the word. I enjoyed reading this poem, but did not understand as much as I would like to. My favorite stanza would have to be the last ...

I think these are awesome, especially the shading. I love 'em.. -*Shimmer

Flame by Hillary Bell..it's really good, actually..

Creamy beige. (I have notebook paper like that!) What color are the words I am now typing on the screen?

I really like this. Nothing else to say, I guess. Just good work.. -*Shimmer

Well hey there, Xeno, I'm southern too! (Alabama) I hope you have a good time here, I sure am. Hope to see ya around! -*Shimmer

You're welcome.

I love them all.

Pretty good. You missed commas in a few places, I've noticed. Keep up the good work. -*Shimmer

Smack-banging - dancing and singing your heart out Laffing - laughing really hard