Shimmer

I think it was pretty good, but I agree with Galatea..this just sounds like whining and moaning about the new woman in the man's life. I liked the beginning..you explained ...

I agree with xanthan gum, this could use some work.

Ameen, Khayriyyah.. This is made me want to cry.

Eat breakfast. What would you say to Micheal Jackson if he knocked at your front door asking to go to the bathroom?

LoL, I'm joining, cause I've never heard of them either..

I like it..'tis very sweet.. :wink: In some places I felt like the rhythm wasn't very good, but I think that's about it. One the first line of the last ...

In this thread you can post the interesting things which are currently waiting to be pasted somewhere.. My pasting: (174,000,087)

never do tht again Translation: Never do that again. Yayz! Only one letter missing! The trick is not to rush..

"AHHHHHHHHHHH MY GOOOODDDDDDDDD!" What would you do if you woke up one day with your sister being Hillary Duff?

"Do you have change fo a dolla? I want fo kwattahs" What would you do if you woke up one day as Hillary Duff?

Awesome. I love them.. -*Shimmer

I love your shading! I wish I could shade as well as that. :P I like the first tent..and the hand is awesome. -*Shimmer

I like them all, the second one is the best, I think. The third one could use fixing up.

Pretty random, I must say. I see you have decided against posting it, Splintered Thorn? It's been like..10 days.

"Where'd you get the time?" What would you say if you knew that the world would be coming to an end tommorrow?