Shia225

How sad... I'm a marshmallow when it comes to dramatic and sad things like this. But, it definitely rings a bell. I like the use of words, like "float", because ...

This was good, a little less descriptive than I expected, but still good. The teen sounds like a smart kid, that implies -to me- that she is against tobacco. I ...

Blerg, I hate writers' block, too. But that certainly made my soul laugh. You should make that into a poem, it would get a little more attention. This is the ...

I think this was a good essay, but you missed a big one. 'Mankind' or 'man-made' is also symbolizing it. Plus, on 'How Its Made', a T.V. show on the ...

The limit in Haiku's are seventeen syllables; that was arond fourty-eight. A little sad, for me. I don't see a main topic; it talks about essays, eagles, tides, and mountains. ...