Sherly

Alright...I am not really much into criticizing ones grammatical error as long as I "feel" the message. All I can say is, on this writing I saw my childhood years ...

Alright AJ bro..this piece might get a little confusing but I do understand the message you are trying to persuade. The piece is actually not written for audience as I ...

Thanks Angel. Indeed it helped :)

I feel the burden of the world And so I write To ease the burden that I hold, so I write What did I expect, they ask I expected what ...

Thanks for this Rosey :pirate3:

Illusion rich, well written, dark yet an enlightening poem. Love yah Qara! This is a great piece. -Verg

Thank you night writer..you know when you are in pain or even any other emotion there are no boundaries on what you can write..from the most rusty cliche to the ...

Thanks for the review, I appreciate it and thanks for correcting a few grammatical error. That help!

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