Sherbet

I liked this story very much. Simple and sweet. Lol, my boyfriend is just like Lucas. I'm not allowed to wear anything that might attract attention from other guys! The ...

Brian, I understand what you are saying about using more creative language but I purposly didnt. This poem is a reflection of what Im feeling and as my head is ...

Lately I've been thinking about my past and some pretty painful things have come up... That, on top of alot of stress, have made life... well... not so great. Anyway, ...

Wow... That was... Beautiful. Very meaningful. This one is getting printed out and hung up in my room. Excellent job. I have no critism at all. It seemed as though ...

Thanks for that. Is my age showing up wrong, or did you misread it? Because I'm actually 16... Still extremly novice though!

Everyone please comment! Thanks. Dream Come with me to land my own, A place I go to escape from home. Stay where you are and close your eyes Now dream ...

Thanks! I'll look into that.

I would really, really, really like everyone's comments. Good and bad. My Road Here I am, alone I walk Down roads of rocks and ice. There’s no one here with ...

MESSAGE FROM MIDNIGHT...SORRY I ACCIDENTALLY DELETED THE FIRST POST (WITH THE POEM SO GO DOWN TO MY MESSAGE AT THE BOTTOM OF THE POST FOR NOW WITH THE POEM UNTILL ...

lol, thanks for the gift. And thanks everyone for lower-casing my name. maddie, madds, maddsos, madd, maddflea (my middle name is Lee), or whatever... I dont mind what you call ...

Hope this is in the right forum... Anyway, here it goes... Black Princess Alone in this tower far away I pace cold halls and cry Never do I see the ...

That was really beautiful! It seemed to capture just the right things... If that makes any sense

Wow, that's really good. I like it

hey, Im maddison. I live right out in the bush of Australia... I have an obsession with not capitalizing the 'm' in my name. (Im also weird) I write a ...