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  • Fiction Discussion Re: that certain kind of 'line' you found

    "You bitch, you killed me! You suck!" This makes me want to go find this book!

    Jul 9, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Wedding Present!

    Thanks!!! The choppiness, I'm afraid, is partly a result of bad lighting. I will try and take a picture in more natural lighting and see if that helps, any. In ...

    Jul 6, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Abusive Parents (Realistic Fiction)

    Nice work! I'm going to start from the end and work my way up, because the most glaring difficulty I have with this is at the end. Firstly, it's almost ...

    Jul 6, 2010
  • Writing Activities Re: Hello, my name is...

    Hello, my name is Nicolai. And I'm lost. Again.

    Jul 6, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Nature

    1) This one is my favorite, I think. I like that you've caught the reflection of the sky, but ommitted it in its original form. It makes the photograph more ...

    Jul 6, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Virginia Slime

    I started off with the same bristly sensation of drama that Perdido has expressed, but when I reached the end of the poem, I did find that you had something ...

    Jul 6, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Wedding Present!

    Did this up tonight for my "little" cousin, who's getting married in September =) I'm going to frame it with a bunch of pressed flowers for her as a gift! ...

    Jul 6, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Afternoon in July

    Some of these are really great! I'll go through and critique them one-by-one. 1) This might be my favorite. In some of the others, your light seems a little blue, ...

    Jul 5, 2010
  • General Articles Re: Why Do We Hate Pit Bulls?

    This is a good topic! I work for a rescue that deals mainly in so-called 'pit bulls' (which includes, here, American Staffordshire Terriers, Staffordshire Terriers, and various breeds of bulldog). ...

    Jul 5, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Independence Day!

    Fireworks! Our neighborhood has an annual competition to see who can get away with the most (illegal) fireworks on Independence Day. It's extremely entertaining, and way better than the shows ...

    Jul 4, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: fRiEs Official Art Thread*New Drawin*

    This is a little incongruous, I think. I like your work on the person on the right, but I can't quite make out what is going on in the second ...

    Jul 3, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Bayonetta

    A couple things bother me about this drawing, which is otherwise interesting and relatively straightforward as a portrait. Her nose is crooked. I think you have tried to effect a ...

    Jul 3, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: My Photography Thread!

    You hate the second one because...? The first one, I'm not in love with. I like your angle (are you standing here? Maybe that's just natural, but the perspective is ...

    Jul 2, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: Please Respect the Meat

    This is a neat little poem, and you definitely have a strong message. The beginning, I liked, but overall my biggest problem with this is the fact that it didn't ...

    Jul 1, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: KD's Color Edited Photos 2

    I'm not a fan of your more recent edits on the rainbow photograph. Initially, I liked it (regardless of the likelihood that a rainbow would occur in that type of ...

    Jul 1, 2010


You can't blame the writer for what the characters say.
— Truman Capote