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I apparently write like Tolstoy =P I wouldn't put too much stock into this haha.

I'm going to critique this in parts, because there were a few things that really stood out to me (good and bad). From an overall standpoint, I do like that ...

I can only speak for myself, but the only reason I was looking for clarification here is because this forum is most often used for self-taken photos or credited works ...

These look like product photographs to me, rather than self-taken. But please correct me if I'm wrong! Since I'm assuming you didn't take these, I'm not going to critique your ...

This is very nice! Your tone here is very blanketed, and I mean that in a complimentary way. It seems to stay consistant throughout the poem, and that makes it ...

This is a very typically rhyme structure. I don't think it's a terrible poem, but I detest the opening (it is very formulaic and simplistic), and some of the pairing ...

Charactarization, definitely. I need to work on my Pat Buchanan jokes. -sigh- I'm such a terrible writer.

1. How many people, who you know at least originally over the Internet, would you count as friends? Two, but both will be attending my college in the fall (online ...

Warning you in advance that I'm going to be a little rough on this first batch, only because your last shot is great =) 1) I like this one compared ...

Those pictures are awesome. Where did you go to do this? I don't like the first picture so much because the whale looks like a big brown blob in the ...

This is interesting. The only thing, I think, that takes away from what you are doing here is that you're not showing us anything. You're telling us all about you, ...

Just a few thoughts that hit me right off the bat after starting this topic and reviewing your individual concerns: Does religion help people to overcome fear, or difficulties? First, ...

1) I agree here that the angle is a little overdone and severe. I don't think it was necessary for this photo, which would have been pretty without the added ...

1) I don't really like this one. It isn't terribly original, and the focus is not very good. Everything just looks blurry--almost like a cell-phone picture as opposed to a ...

This is neat. I would like to see a little more contrast here--right now it's a very light piece without a lot of the deep shadows that would really make ...