Shepherd

Hey! I'm Shep (Emilija or Emily if you like). You'll like it here. -insert Wal*Mart-style smiley face here- Anyway, archery, huh? Do you compete? What sort of bow do you ...

If you were faced with the option of beef or chicken, which would you go for? Beef. How many times does someone need to repeat something before it gets annoying? ...

Cool! I'm going to go through this piece-by-piece, because you've got a few grammatical errors and some sentences with awkward structure. I never thought that the day would come; that ...

Damjan The last several werewolves burst in noisily, and Damjan counted members a little impatiently before he began speaking again. A few members of the meeting had offered up information, ...

Ach, sorry, Drew! Damjan Damjan rolled his shoulders, bored. He couldn't sense people as well in this form. But the Silverfang rep had wanted to meet this way, and she ...

Damjan "Damjan," he replied, speaking to the first representative to arrive. A she-wolf. She fidgeted, and alighted on some noise near the treeline and Damjan rose, stood. His hackles bristled ...

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(I imagine we are first meeting in a semi-rural setting? Feel free to correct if this is wrong--I've left it open-ended, so if necessary we can just say that we ...

I'm going to critique these one-by-one, as I tend to do wtih photographs! I think some of these are compositionally very nice, and as soon as you start to play ...

It depends on what it is =) Novel? Short story? Poem? Science fiction? Fantasy? Non-fiction?

I'm going to disregard grammar and spelling flaws, as it seems you have help with that already! Overall, I think this comes across as being a little cliched. Because we ...

I would agree with those who have mentioned the abrupt way in which you've presented the troll. Also, I might venture that it is overwritten. Your description, in parts, is ...

Name: Damjan Age: (20 to 35) 21 Gender: Male Appearance: (written and a picture) (photo attached) Damjan is stocky and physically substantial. He has generally dark eyes, which are greenish ...

Can I claim the Redwolf representative? I'll be right back with a profile =)

Just a quicky- I know what Special Education is. My mother is a Special Education teacher for the middle school in our area. I meant that the MC is getting ...