Shepherd

This poem seems to be a little disorganized to me. The ideas just don't seem quite cohesive, and it reads a little bit like a rough draft that could use ...

Excuse the general grossness, but this is my dad and I at my sister's graduation (can you tell I was too lazy to do my hair?). Edited because, Lilicia, I ...

I read a Creole spin off of Cinderella when I was growing up, and I was obsessed with it. Still love the premise and the way everything was worded. It ...

I don't think questioning the validity of my original suggestion is going to be helpful for the OP. I was trying to help, but clearly you have a problem with ...

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I'd like to see this a little bit bigger. What medium did you use?

This is very nice. I have no issues with your perspective of course--as you have prevously demonstrated, you have quite a grasp of such basic concepts. The only thing that ...

I really like this, and I would love to see more of this! Wind whispered through the trees as I ran. My paws hit the ground almost silently; quite an ...

These are very nice! I'm going to review them individually of course, as is my custom, but to be honest they are all well thought-out and interesting. 1) This is ...

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I liked your avatar. And then I thought it reminded me of some strange manga/anime series I watched as a child. And then I forgot about it.

Well. I was going to go in and tear this apart, like I like to do, but this is a fantastic story. There are a few grammatical errors, which will ...

Hm. I actually really like this. Admittedly, I was very much put off by the introduction of a date so early in the poem. When this is read aloud, it ...

This is a very nice poem--sharp and short. The only thing that frustrated me was the sense of disappointment once it was over. I would love to see you expand ...

Ah I do love Recurves! I used to have an old Grozer Kassai. It was ancient but it was surprisingly reliable (when I was paying attention--the old thing had a ...