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I saw this right from the start: as soon as you started talking about that coat I thought about the barn jacket that I have hanging in my closet. It's ...

Save me a spot? I don't have time to post a profile right now, but this looks like fun!

Yep, that's right! Things I Will Review Anything except... Things I Will Not Review Novels (unfortunately, I only have so much free time) Someone give me something to review? Please? ...

I am having a little trouble finding your rhythm here, but the first part of the second section is very strong. she emerged out of her tomb This, I thought, ...

My laptop, when I'm feeling confident about what I am writing. If I'm feeling intimidated, and I don't want to see what I have already written, I will write with ...

Neat! Your pencilwork here has a lot of dimension, and you have a very distinctive style!!! I have always been a person attracted by a certain level of detail, and ...

The quality of the photographs isn't conducive to a detailed review, but I do like these! They are very creative. =) The only thing that bothers me, personally, is that ...

Well, I'm still pretty new here. But I'm going to hazard a guess and say that you are known for being...um...how to word this? A non-fiction guru, maybe? =)

This is a great start! The only things I see right now have to do with the pacing, but I think your concept is sound. I am having trouble visualizing ...

This is very nice! What sort of paper do you have? I'm wondering if you might do better on something with a little bit of a different bite to it. ...

, you make money on your drawings? They are definately worth money! I'd like to see more of them sometime =D Yup. I supplement the meager income I make flipping ...

It's like some people hate 1984, true it's depressing as hell and makes you wanna die. But that's point he was making it way he saw us heading if we ...

1. A Brave New World (Uninteresting, cliched, and it repeated itself a thousand times. The themes weren't that great, so it relied heavily on supposedly shocking tactics.) It was hardly ...

Becoming inhuman =/= character development. She didn't change as a person. It bored me. (No personal offense intended to any die-hard Twilight Enterprise fans)

Okay, so this is definitely much better following a little tweaking. One thing that I have been mulling over is that I don't feel very invested in the characters. I ...