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I write very small, but it's usually just standard lettering (none o' that fancy cursive stuff). It's neat, regardless, it just takes me longer to write in cursive. Even so, ...

I like this last one, except that it seems that his wing widens after the elbow joint. It would look more natural if it were shortened slightly (or you could ...

Oh no! I hate conversations like that! Once, a good friend of mine called me at 2:00 a.m. for what appeared to be no particular reason. When I answered the ...

Name: Laika Age: 3 (21 in human years) Gender: female Type: animal (coyote) Appearance: attached Skills: extremely fast, agile, quiet, good fighter Personality: quiet, observant, cautious Views: she h

You don't get over it. Edited to be more specific on your character's reaction: Depending on her personality, she could react in any number of ways. A tentative, withdrawn person ...

I disagree about the neck...I think anatomically speaking and from the angle we (as viewers) are at, it's just fine. Her hand, though, looks a little awkward to me, because ...

1. Favorite smilie? =) (yup, I'm a simple sort of person) 2. What's my middle name? Walter. 3. Do you believe in faeries? Nope. 4. Do you tan easily? (depending ...

I really like the narrative quality of this poem, and I think the concept is extremely strong. You have executed this nicely! A few things that tripped me up as ...

NepoGirl: Thanks! Only my eyes are actually a really boring shade of blue. The light in that picture only makes them look cool! A.A.A.M.: Haha unfortunately not. But sometimes, when ...

Kaua'i! And, not just Kaua'i, but kyaking in Kaua'i! Awesome! (and you are really pretty, by the way!!!) This is me. I look gross because I just hiked through a ...

This is very nice! =) I think Hiadel has the setting elaboration down. It seems a little staticky to me. Also, I would definitely try and keep this a little ...

Q1: If you had become very good friends with someone through MSN that you'd never met in real life, but accidentally made out that you lived in Scotland, if they ...

**Okay! I figure they can meet up in a little while once everything gets moving =) **

Luka Luka was lounging in the dust beside Hermes cabin. He was relaxed, stretched comfortably in the sunlight, which was purest here. He was whittling a shard of wood with ...

This is something that obviously has a lot of emotion tied to it, which I like. It makes it more intense and interesting for the reader, and you have done ...