Shepherd

So, I had an old thread where I said I was going to put my sketches. Only it turned into more of a sketches/photography thread. This one's just going to ...

9! I just wish I could see more of her =)

This is cool! I can tell that a companion of the canine sort inspired this. I would like to see this pulled apart into stanzas, to make it a little ...

Overall, this gives a neat impression, I would say. The contractions seem out of place, given that you have taken a more archaic setting and a more formal style of ...

8. It would have been a 10, only it frustrated me. I couldn't figure out where it started. So I would watch and wait for the beginning. And then I ...

Well first off I attributed an Irish accent to all your posts. And then I discovered you liked House. The combination of these things made you rather distinctive in my ...

Thanks guys! And haha I hate my hair =P Don't worry, LaReina. I think I've got PTSD now.

Well hi! My friend's father worked at the races as a vet. He absolutely loved it. Now he rehabs racehorses (and sheep and a three-legged donkey named Jethro). Take a ...

Your language use here is excellent. I do think that your subject is a little cliched, a little bit mainstream--and because you have chosen to produce a poem that is ...

Evi, I'm sure you will be just fine. The nice thing about larger, public school environments is that you can find a group of people whom you can readily identify ...

9. -giggles-

You have expanded this excellently. I don't think I have anything else to say! Great work!

Forestqueen, you are unbelievably pretty! =) Slightly less gross picture of me.... P8130973.JPG

This is an interesting approach to a common storyline, and I think your take here is definitely worth continuing with. One thing that bugged me a little was the abrasiveness ...

Hm. Your rhythm here is good, and I think you've got a compelling subject. It just leaves me wanting you to explore this a little more. You have the emotion ...