Shepherd

Of Sheep (deleted upon pending publication--thanks for all your help!)

The first one read a little bit like a machine gun. It was fast and rushed, and I felt myself tumbling through it rather than enjoying some of the more ...

This was not a bad collection of letters, by any means, but because the storyline here is so predictable, I think it would be nice to have a few more ...

You've got a good eye! Start playing around with the contrast, here. What kind of watercolors are they? It looks like you used some kind of pencil on the wolf ...

Well, I immediately like you because of the wombat reference in your location. I mean, anyone who outright mentions wombats has got to be pretty edgy. And pretty awesome. But ...

Actually, I like the almost-sepia tones in the flower photograph, and the fact that it's a little off-center. I don't know that I would say that the first one is ...

Skillet Red Ryan Cabrera Kenny Chesney (-hides-) Boston Anberlin Barenaked Ladies (uhhh it's not what it sounds like) The Fray Breaking Benjamin Nickelback (yea, I know it's just the same ...

9/10. I'm a sucker for graduated coloration (big fancy way of saying black to red) =D

This is a neat concept! I was a little confused, though. Initially, I couldn't visualize the path along which she was traveling. At first, I was under the (apparently mistaken) ...

This is very nice! I am a big fan of Illustrator, though I don't use it often. In terms of structure, I would recommend first and foremost that you use ...

Banned for reminding me of a 1987 song. -sings- I'm a livin in a box, I'm a livin in a cardboard box...

I didn’t like this place. I couldn’t stand the putrid stench of it; musty and dank. It smelt like the rotted, moldy stench that comes from a swamp. It smelt ...

This is cool. I think you have really effectively engaged the reader here, from the start. I'm a little tripped up by the lack of capitalization, and some of the ...

8/10. Purty! =)

Boy you really did jump right into this! (Sorry it took me 80 million years to get you a review!) Personally, I would appreciate a little more build-up, here. The ...