ShelbyMG

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the critique, it's really helped. There were alot of things I didn't realize should be in the prologue. I will add some things ...

This is an AWESOME beginning! I love the story line. I like your new twist/view on the relationship between God and Satan. I don't think anyone else had ever thought ...

This is my first review ever, so if I say or do something wrong, will you please let me know? I don't know if there is something specific I need ...

This is rated 16+ because there is some blood and violence. If you think that this should be rated something different, please let me know. Thank you! I hope you ...