Shearwater

Well, hey there, it's Pink! As requested. =] Alright, *rubs hands* let's get started. Nitpicks "We have found another one," she said to me over the phone in serious tone. ...

Hey, Pink here, as requested. So I read through your brief explanation and I think I understand what's going on here. Alright, I just want to point out some nitpicks ...

Whoo-hoo Jayliegh! Are you seriously taking out the engagement? Why? This was really good. I just love Warren and Fay (I know I said that, but I just wanted to ...

Hey there, Pink here :wink: I'm sorry. I'm not here to review, it's just...I laughed so hard I almost fell off my chair. My parents were looking at me like ...

Hey friend, It's me again! I can't wait to see what you're planning for the next chapter by the way. Alright, no nitpicks because for some reason my brain refuses ...

Hey Tanya, I'm going to review this piece for you, so let's get started. Nitpicks “Daddy! NO!” You do not need to capitalize, just "No!" No,” she thought, “where did ...

Whoo hoo it's posted! Alright, Pink is here to do some reviewing. Nitpicks Her voice vibrates off the rocks around us. Her tone is strong and confident. You can totally ...

Hey, Fruits! Pink here, as requested. :D Nitpicks All nervously retreated into their cells; they knew they would waste away in them for eternity, This sentence can flow so much ...

Hi, Ace I'll be reviewing this piece for you today. NitPicks It was early one morning at least (two words) five and the sun was just setting over the horizon ...

Hello, Pink here. I'll be reviewing your first chapter. (by the way I've seen your book cover, nice.) Nitpicks 2 years later, Spell out all numbers unless they're in the ...

Hi Addawen, Pink here, dropping by to do a short review. A few nitpicks... Slowly my memory came back to me, the most vivid was of Kenna charging towards me ...

It's me! Again...lol I rose from my seat and started walking towards the stares to the stage. Stairs? lol Also, maybe reword this as, "I rose from my seat and ...

Hey Jayleigh, it's me! Okay so I don't really have any nitpicks here, most of them have already been pointed out. I mean you did a great job with your ...

Hello Silver Sun, Okay first of all, the beginning reminded me of the clock tower scene from Kingdom Hearts. If you know that game... So does the name Xenos. Haha, ...

Hey there Classy! Thanks for PMing me about your second part. Hopefully my review helps! So here we go! But, I was forced to focus my attention on the inside ...