Shearwater

Hi there! I'm going to be reviewing this for you. So I'm going to start with a bit of nitpicks first, okay? I had only known him for a year, ...

Hi! I'll be reviewing this for you today. Firstly, you just jumped into your story without really getting into the plot or anything. You just start the story right off ...

Hi there! I'm here to review! ^.^ I really like this piece. It's quite emotional and moving and you were able to do that all without using ginnormous amounts of ...

Hi there! I'll be reviewing this for you. It's going to be a quick review since I haven't really read the other chapters of this. I have just a few ...

Yo, Freak! I'm here to review! xD So, I don't really have any nitpicks for this prologue and I'm glad you wrote something before the whole first chapter thing. xD ...

Hey there! I'm back for this last chapter that you have. :D I don't know how helpful I'm going to be though. I can't find much to critique about your ...

Hi Peanut! I'm back for more. ^.^ Alrighty, once again your writing is great. I love the descriptions and yadda, yadda. I hate repeating this all the time but I ...

Hi there! I'm here to review this piece for you! So I liked the first chapter, or the first part of the first chapter and I'm definietly liking this chapter ...

Hey there, Peanut! I'm here to review this! I frown; it’s not as pretty In the first two paragraphs you already use three semicolons, ; . It's just three right ...

Hey there! I'm here to review! ^___^ I'm not going to say I love it because I don't really understand it. It's something, a bit of machinery that she made ...

Wow this chapter was filled with a lot of things. I mean, wow. Hoas freaking turned into a girl? Who is her cousin? Her father has a sister? I'm so ...

Okay, I like how slowly things are changing and as Born2 said, it's not as repetitive anymore so that makes me just as happy as Solea...when she's in a good ...

Okay so I accidentlly started reading chapter 8 before I read this one and I was like, wait...this doesn't seem normal! XD So I'm back to the right spot and ...

Hey there! I'll be reviewing this for you today! First of all, I did like this. Mostly the ending because it seemed very power compared to the rest of the ...

Hi there! I'm here to review for you! "Rylee, I fell like something’s wrong." I explained as I buckled my seat belt. *feel like something is wrong. He started to ...