Shearwater

Hey, Pal, thanks for telling me it was up :) Now, on to the review :) Entering the hall, I saw everyone was there. Coach saw me coming in and ...

PolarBear

Why, hello Arkay! Pink here :) Welcome to YWS! Yes, I know, the site can be quite difficult to navigate, I remember when I was the newbie...ugh. >.< Anyways, don't ...

Thanks for the comments guys. I know, I was trying to get the family side out, but I will make the next chapter interesting, I promise. 11 is where things ...

Hey, Sprite :) Pink here, dropping by for a review! Nitpicks “Artem? Won’t you play with me?” I grimaced, but I did not reply. I wanted her to be gone, ...

Chapter Ten (Lucas) A lake is the landscape's most beautiful and expressive feature. It is earth's eye; looking into which the beholder measures the depth of his own nature. ~Henry ...

Hey! Pink here :) So, I agree with Coral, you should resize. But I'm glad you at least gave us a link. Looking at it, now - I think's it's ...

Hi Silver! Pink here, hey look at that, we're both colors! Somewhat. So you like Fantasy huh? As do I, I'm currently starting a new novel in but if you ...

Nidalap_TsaL Yeah, I know, it's just the name spelled backwards. Honestly, I couldn't think of one >.

...I think that's kind of freaky O.o Edit I actually looked them up and it seems like they're mediabots that search keywords so they know what ads to put up ...

Hey guys! Super thanks for the reviews :) Jai Thanks for the review! You pointed out a lot of mistakes and I've gone through and fixed them ;) I never ...

Hey, Skins! Alright, so I started this review yesterday but got caught up in a couple other reviews that needed some last minute critiques. Thus, I just saved this and ...

MeowMeow

GirlInTheMirror-Done! Sorry I didn't have time to review your poem last night, I fell asleep :(

Hiya! Here to review! I know it's late but I still wanted to do one, even though I'm terrible with poetry. It's just hard for me to write...but! I will ...